Write a one-line pitch that doesn't sound like a brochure

Three versions built from your customers' own words, and a practice run where Miles pushes back.

What to ask

Help me sharpen the one-line pitch from my Marketing & Sales plan section. Use the words my customers actually used in week one, not marketing language. Give me three versions, tell me which is strongest and why, then let me practice it on you and push back if it sounds like a brochure. Update the plan section with the version I land on.

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